S. Van Den Eynde, «Crying to God Prayer and Plot in the Book of Judith», Vol. 85 (2004) 217-231
If prayers are defined as communication in which prayers receive a response from God, this implies that they have a function as regards the plot of a story. As a test case, the impact of praying on the plot as well as the characterisation in the book of Judith (containing 21 references to praying) is analysed. The specific characterisation of God through prayer affects the plot. Apart from their importance for characterisation and plot, the prayers in Judith contribute in their own way to the development of its main theme: who is truly God, Nebuchadnezzar or YHWH?
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Jael killed Sisera in her tent, by driving a tent pin through his head,
this phrase evokes the possibility that Judith will try to kill the general
of the enemy (and actually, in a similar location and by a comparable
wound, making use of the opportunity that the drinking of the enemy
creates) (14).
Judith also mentions the ultimate purpose of God’s action: the
acknowledgement of all the people that God is the God of power
and might. This is the opposite aim of the rationale which drove
Nebuchadnezzar ’s men: all their actions were meant to lead to the
universal worshipping of Nebuchadnezzar as god (Jdt 3,8), excluding
the possibility that any other deity has power (see Jdt 6,2: “who is god
except Nebuchadnezzar?â€). This line of the plot is now countered by
the possibility that the opposite event will take place: the whole people
will acknowledge the God of Israel. Even Achior, the Ammonite, will
eventually have faith in this God (Jdt 14,10).
The prayer of Judith is clearly of importance as far as the plot is
concerned. Through biblical allusions, including a reference to an
answered prayer of the past, it is suggested that God will answer her
prayer and act through Judith. Moreover, concrete hints as regards the
concrete development of the events are given.
c) Judith’s prayers in the hostile camp (Jdt 11–13)
Two lines of plot are present in Jdt 11–13: the deceitful plot of
Judith, suggesting that her actions, her prayers included, will lead to
the victory of Holofernes on the one hand; and on the other hand,
Judith’s true plans to defeat her enemy and to deliver her people.
Prayer has a function in both the deceitful and the ‘real’ plot.
Judith tells Holofernes that she will go out every night to pray (Jdt
11,17; 12,6-8). This fits her deceit. She tells the (at least in the ears of
the enemy) plausible lie that when she prays to God, her God will
inform her when the Israelites have sinned (Jdt 11,17), which will be
the first step in the victory of Holofernes. Yet, the so-called prayers to
find out whether Israel has already sinned, also fulfil a function in the
‘real’ plot. The enemy gets accustomed to the idea that Judith and her
slave woman leave the camp regularly. In this way, Judith will be able
to escape once she has killed Holofernes (Jdt 13,3.10).
Judith’s actual prayers all deal with the ‘real’ plot, since she prays
(14) See S.A. WHITE, “In the Steps of Jael and Deborah: Judith as Heroineâ€,
No One Spoke Ill of Her. Essays on Judith (ed. J.C. VAN DER KAM) (SBL EJL 2;
Atlanta 1992) 5-16.