S. Van Den Eynde, «Crying to God Prayer and Plot in the Book of Judith», Vol. 85 (2004) 217-231
If prayers are defined as communication in which prayers receive a response from God, this implies that they have a function as regards the plot of a story. As a test case, the impact of praying on the plot as well as the characterisation in the book of Judith (containing 21 references to praying) is analysed. The specific characterisation of God through prayer affects the plot. Apart from their importance for characterisation and plot, the prayers in Judith contribute in their own way to the development of its main theme: who is truly God, Nebuchadnezzar or YHWH?
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intervention in an armed conflict by giving the sword for vengeance
and by granting the victory. The requests for action deal with the defeat
of the enemy as well, by breaking the strength of the opponents and
giving strength to Judith. The latter moreover suggests that God can
act through human hands and answers the prayers of his people.
The prayer also describes God’s power and what it consists in, by
description and by characterisation of the adversaries. These advers-
aries rely on military force for their might (see Jdt 2,5) and are arrogant
and proud enough to think that they can attack the tabernacle where
God’s name rests. Israel’s God, though, does not rely upon a large
number, or on men of strength, but in being the God of the weak, of
being the God who protects Israel. Judith uses this image of God as an
incentive for YHWH to grant her request: as Israelite widow and a
(weak) woman, she both belongs to the people YHWH protects and to
the social group of the weak (16).
c) Judith’s prayers in the hostile camp (Jdt 11–13)
In the hostile camp, Judith pretends that God will answer her
prayer to inform her of when her people sins. This fits her image of a
traitorous woman, who came to betray her people, since they have
sinned (Jdt 11,11-19). The image of God she portrays, is that of a
revengeful God, who will punish his people for every transgression of
his law, even when they asked to be relieved from their plight to fulfil
these laws seen the context of war. This is a caricatural concretisation
of Achior’s statements that a God who hates iniquity is with them, so
that when the Israelites depart from God’s ways, they get defeated in
war; and that if the people is free of guilt (literally: ajnomiva, law-
lessness), their God will protect them (Jdt 5,17-18.21). Though this
image of God is a caricature, Holofernes buys it.
The actual prayers of Judith characterise Judith and her God
differently. Judith wants God to act through her in order to save her
people, and God is the God who will protect his people by acting
through her.
d) Prayers of blessing and praise (Jdt 13,17; Jdt 16)
The prayer of blessing characterises God as a God who indeed acts
against the enemies of his people. The recognition of both God as the
saviour of his people and Judith as the woman through whom God
(16) Though she does certainly not fit the image of the “poor widow†in need,
see Jdt 8,7.