Gregory T.K. Wong, «Song of Deborah as Polemic», Vol. 88 (2007) 1-22
Focusing on its rhetorical structure, this article argues that the Song of Deborah in Judg 5 may have been composed not so much primarily to celebrate a victory, but to serve as a polemic against Israelite non-participation in military campaigns
against foreign enemies. Possible implications of such a reading on the song’s relationship with the prose account in Judg 4 and its date of composition are also explored.
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23, the reason for the corresponding pronouncement of blessing on
Jael is not provided in v. 24 but only in vv. 25-27. For this reason, most
in fact see vv. 24-27 as a single rhetorical unit.
But while there is no denying that vv. 25-27 must logically be seen
as a continuation of v. 24, I have, however, separated the two in the
above analysis for the following reasons.
First, while the reason for cursing Meroz in v. 23 is relatively
straightforward and succinctly put, the reason for the pronouncement
of blessing on Jael is less direct and given in much greater detail.
Therefore, if vv. 24-27 is taken as a single rhetorical unit, it would
result in an imbalance in the final two panels of the larger chiastic
structure proposed above since vv. 24-27 would be significantly longer
than v. 23.
But second, it is also noteworthy that vv. 25-27 actually seems to
be structured as some kind of parallel with vv. 28-30. After all, the
main character in both these stanzas is a woman, and in both cases, it
is the respective woman’s actions or thoughts in relation to Sisera that
is in view. Furthermore, if O’Connell is right in that the giving of milk
to Sisera by Jael is intended to portray her as a mother figure, then we
have in the two stanzas the portrayal of a mother figure who kills and
a birth mother who waits (43). And ironically, in this case, it is the
mother figure who kills that is celebrated, while the birth mother who
waits is mocked for her naïvety.
In fact, one can even make a case that, taken together with v. 31a-
b, the two panels comprising vv. 25-27 and vv. 28-30 can also be
arranged chiastically. For if Jael, by her action, represents those who
love YHWH, while Sisera’s mother represents YHWH’s enemies, then
the following chiastic structure is possible:
A. The triumph of those who love YHWH demonstrated (vv. 25-27).
B. The dashed hopes of YHWH’s enemies demonstrated (vv. 28-30).
B’. The destruction of YHWH’s enemies proclaimed (v. 31a).
A’. The glory of those who love YHWH proclaimed (v. 31b).
In any case, what the above seems to show is that vv. 25-27 may in
fact function as a hinge stanza that is linked both to what immediately
precedes in v. 24 and to what immediately follows in vv. 28-30. And to
the extent that it functions as a pivot between two subsections of the
song that otherwise have no direct relationship with each other, it is
(43) O’CONNELL, Judges, 123. While blj can also refer to fat and is not often
associated with nursing imagery, Isa 28,9; 60,16 does lend some support to
O’Connell’s assertion.